We
are learning to...
·
write a personal recount about something
we have done or experienced
Criteria:
·
have an opening statement
that tells who what and when
·
write the events in the order they
happened
·
have a conclusion or personal response
My New Friend
I have a new friend. We are going to play at lunch time when we go to play and it will be fun.
When I go home then I went to bed. In the morning I got up. I felt happy because it is another day off school.
Teacher comment: You have tried hard to write a recount. To make it more interesting for the reader, try to add some more details. What game did you play with your new friend?
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