We are learning to...
· write a personal recount about something we have done or experienced
· have an opening statement that tells who what and when
· write the events in the order they happened
· have a conclusion or personal response
My New Friend
I have a new friend. We are going to play at lunch time when we go to play and it will be fun.
When I go home then I went to bed. In the morning I got up. I felt happy because it is another day off school.
Teacher comment: You have tried hard to write a recount. To make it more interesting for the reader, try to add some more details. What game did you play with your new friend?