Sunday, 29 March 2015

T1 Writing

We are learning to...
·      write a personal recount about something we have done or experienced
·      have an opening statement that tells who what and when
·      write the events in the order they happened

·      have a conclusion or personal response

My New Friend

I have a new friend. We are going to play at lunch time when we go to play and it will be fun.
When I go home then I went to bed. In the morning I got up. I felt happy because it is another day off school.

Teacher comment: You have tried hard to write a recount. To make it more interesting for the reader, try to add some more details. What game did you play with your new friend?

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